Friday, 14 February 2014

The Breaking Point

Wrote this a while back and edited it quite a bit since...


Am I getting close - close to the breaking point?
Do you think it’s finally happening to me?
I can feel it coming, taking me down.
Was it meant to be this way?
For me to be alone?
To be the last one
Standing
In this
Cold
Place..
Someday,
I’ll be gone…
Vanish into thin air.
Crumble and merge with
The soft, damp, brown earth
My absence – will it be felt?
Will there be anyone?
Anyone at all - who
Might feel lost?
Without
Me….

2 comments:

  1. More often than not my mind has wondered on that path.
    It gave me nothing but a heart heavy with self pity.

    And always the same set of wishes; "I wish i could go back to 2004" then things would've been different than this.

    No No wait wait "I should go back to 1998"

    And I finally end up in "I should go back to 1987 September (Should be around that time since um born in June 1988) and give ma dad a condom.

    So that I won't be here in the first place

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  2. Mario, don't you think, if he got one, may be a certain friend won't have a you to go out with tomorrow? I do wonder myself, all the time... But they say that there's light at the end of the tunnel... I'm looking for the light.. Why don't you come walk with me?

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Hey people... Please don't feel afraid to add the drops of your emotions into my little river... This is all about sharing. Sometimes, more often than not, I know there are people dealing with worse than me and I want to reach out to those... I might not understand the intensity of your feelings, but I'll try and hold your hand... Hugs don't hurt either :) Lots of Love!